Now, with that obligatory declaration out of the way, an update:
Still pounding away here. That's been my fortunate reaction to a longer-than-expected wait for Simon & Schuster's editorial note on Dissident. Rather than twiddling my thumbs, I'm working (till my fingers bleed, if I'm going to extend the digit metaphor) on another, unrelated thriller for teens. Now, ironically enough, rather than aching for the much anticipated editorial letter, I'm hoping it doesn't arrive until I've finished this new book!
I'm really loving my WIP
(that's writer-acronym-speak for "work-in-progress"), Paint It Black, a
fun story -- and one I hope will trigger another series. In a perfect world, I'll write both series, staggering release dates. Toward that end, I'm barely blogging, answering emails,
reading for pleasure, etc..., but I am writing and exercising and happy.
I've rewritten the beginning of Paint It
Black and have six consecutive chapters finished that feel right. Beyond
that, I have around 50,000 words of scenes and another 60,000 words of planning /
journaling about the book. I’ve also been doing a lot research, all of it
fascinating. This morning, I finished a non-fiction book, ordered two more, and compiled a list of fifty-some questions as the basis for an
interview, for when I contact a local expert. Should be a blast.
With Paint It Black, I'm paying close attention to structure, doing
various kinds of outlines, including one exhaustive version on butcher paper,
which breaks everything down into acts, sequences, and scenes, and then identifies
the setting, purpose, goal, motivation, conflict, and changes resulting from
each scene. A similar approach helped a lot with Dissident, saving me time, sparing me waste, and resulting in a stronger story. I'm loving it
this time, too, and I've started exhaustive outline version 2.0, which I'm
parceling together as I rewrite the book. Fun work.
One of my favorite things about outlining is that it frees me to write the story both recklessly and in layers, zipping through without worrying overmuch about getting everything right the first time. Then I go back through, adding stuff, making moments matter more, heightening, trimming, and paying pointed attention to specific aspects, like setting, emotion, conflict, character development, etc... This is all a huge departure from my old seat-of-the-pants days, and the switch took both faith and loads of "getting used to," but I'm so glad to have discovered this process. It's great fun, and I'm excited about the work it's producing.
Enough about me. How are you? I hope you’re all giddily,
excruciatingly busy. What are you up to? When you write, what's your process? Do you outline or fly by the seat of your pants?

7 comments:
Great to hear all your news! Glad you're exercising. Make sure to reuse the butcher paper when book is done.
Just had long conversation with agent. Fingers crossed on couple things and am almost done with revisions for SORT OF A PREGNANT GIRL...should be ready to submit end of Feb.
Life is good.
I finished my thesis today. I've put it away for a bit so I can edit it from a (semi) fresh perspective, but it's a big weight off my shoulders to finally have the thing done, with a couple months to spare for revisions. I'm really looking forward to working on new projects, and at my own pace.
I didn't outline that book, but I did outline one of my upcoming novels. For me, it seems to depend on the project (the upcoming one is epic dystopian fantasy, so I felt like I *had* to outline). I don't really like outlining, to be honest, but I can certainly understand why many people do. Who knows, maybe I'll start doing it on a regular basis.
ANITA: Best of luck on the finger crossing and the revisions. Glad to know SORT OF A PREGNANT GIRL is almost ready.You're close...
LORING!!!
Congrats on finishing the thesis! Most excellent. I hope you and Zac(k?)celebrate at the Devil's Den.
Your approach to outlining makes good sense. I was resistant at first, figuring I'd hate it, but at the same time, I was sick of wasting pages. Now outlining is a crucial, flexible tool for me.
Again, CONGRATS!
Much to my chagrin, I did not realize that when you respond to your blog emails that they do not go to you. All of that witty banter wasted.
If you decide to leave your writing burrow (I envision it similar to Punxsutawney Phi except no top hat) I would like to meet up. Let me know.
Believe it or not this is my first blog post. That is probably shocking to a guy that follows many more blogs then people I want to talk to in a week.
A. VIRTUE: Welcome to the world of blog comments. I'm honored to have lured you into the 21st century.
Speaking of 21st century technology, I don't know what you mean by your first paragraph.
As to the rest, thanks for the comparison. Woodchucks are possibly my favorite animal. When I do come out of the burrow, let's grab that beer we talked about.
Whenever you make a post, the comments are just emailed to me. Occasionally I would hit reply to the email thinking it went to you. I realized this morning it goes to a "noreply" mailbox.
Had an interesting week at the lake this week, wanted to share the story with you.
Basketball is winding down so I am more available to meet up. Let me know your availability.
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